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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2003-01-17 02:24 PM

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By: Noah Eaton
1/17/02

It’s not what I thought
The moment I bought it all
I thought I had
All I wanted
But I watched it all fall
How could I have sold my soul
To an unconscious mind
From a novelty shop
How could I believe Ouija
Is Egyptian for good luck?

It’s not going to stop
It’s not going to stop
It’s not going to stop…

Spell the question out
Make my last request
Palm reader, can you read sullen hands?
Who’s the face behind this ideomotor effect?
I thought I had you at last
I held your hand on the planchette
But I bit my tongue
And I cried to my regret

It’s not going to stop
It’s not going to stop
It’s not going to stop

I hold your picture between my fingers
Your smile still touches me
What went wrong, was it not meant to be
Or did this love had cerebral palsy?
Now I hold your ghost
The afterglow feels so cold around the clock
I’m going to cry trying to forget you
because the tears aren’t going to stop

It’s not going to stop
It’s not going to stop
It’s not going to stop
It’s not going to stop

Until I spell out your real name...

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-17-2003 02:25 PM).]

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2003-01-17 02:26 PM

evil stuff Ouija boards are.

you are a differnet read from b4.

i like the change

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-01-17 02:38 PM

Like your poem. Write your heart out.
I too, am enjoying your poems. Though with some of them, I am forced to get my dictionary. That is a good thing, however. I admire your mind and ability to write the way you do.

Hugs and love and blessings, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

[This message has been edited by regards2you (01-18-2003 05:06 AM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-01-17 08:12 PM

Noah, you are finding growth
in many ways...

I am very proud of all you are...
and of who you are.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2003-01-17 09:22 PM

enjoy your read

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-01-17 09:54 PM

Noah - my dear friend, keep writing it out. Best to you...

BC

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

6 posted 2003-01-17 10:05 PM

Very interesting read.

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

7 posted 2003-01-17 10:37 PM

Noah...Glad you are getting through this rough time. Keep the faith...Paul

Write your heart
This place where feelings start
Sadness today will soon depart
Tomorrow a new journey in life you will start

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

8 posted 2003-01-18 12:13 PM

Noah,

I enjoyed this poem very much. It is good to be getting the feelings out.

Dawn

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-01-18 02:07 AM

you should put that thing away, those things are evil! *goosebumps*

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