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Ada'doLisdo'ti
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0 posted 2003-01-17 12:38 PM


Sing with me,
All people raise your voice.
Dance with me,
Once you hear the music there's no choice.

No matter how bad your day,
This is your chance to get away.
No matter how bad your life,
No matter how much anger and strife.

Sing with me,
All people raise your voice.
Dance with me,
Once you hear the music there's no choice.

We'll sing at the top of our lungs,
We'll dance tell we're all done.
I'll make you forget, then we'll stop.
I'll make you forget, then we'll stop.

Sing with me,
All people raise your voice.
Dance with me,
Once you hear the music there's no choice.

Listen to the music let it take you away,
Grab and instrument come on and play.
No judgment here we all have problems,
The dancing and singing won’t solve them.

But...
We'll sing at the top of our lungs,
We'll dance tell we're all done.
I'll make you forget, then we'll stop.
I'll make you forget, then we'll stop.

Sing with me,
All people raise your voice.
Dance with me,
Once you hear the music there's no choice.

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

© Copyright 2003 Albert D Lopez - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-01-17 12:43 PM


okay, but how come i dont hear you know, are you sure youre being loud enuf over there in sunny california, its a long way to central jersey you know

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-17-2003 12:44 PM).]

Ada'doLisdo'ti
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2 posted 2003-01-17 12:45 PM


You gotta listen with your very bieng when your that far away....
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-17 01:35 PM


very upbeat words!
regards2you
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4 posted 2003-01-17 01:49 PM




Yes, it is, very upbeat and enjoy the belief that we can sing our cares away. Like your exuberance in this.

Thanks, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-01-17 02:06 PM


I hope you heard me because now I'm hoarse!
Loved this...and I am singing.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Ada'doLisdo'ti
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6 posted 2003-01-17 03:18 PM


Heard you load and clear....some lemon and honey tea will sooth that hoarse....LOL

Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence  the most.

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