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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-17 06:42 AM



The Dance

the dance
was
the one step
as he
walked away

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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enchantingvamp
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since 2002-12-21
Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!
1 posted 2003-01-17 07:28 AM


You completely blow my mind!
This talent you have of saying something so deep with seemingly so little effort stuns me...amazing!

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
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Monticello IN
2 posted 2003-01-18 12:32 PM


Just be glad he wasn't skipping.

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton


passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-01-18 02:06 AM


oh my...I hope this isn't you you're writing about
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