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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-01-16 11:06 PM




barely noticed,
spared
by the grace of the wind,
the remaining few
that embellish
the lifeless tree,
caught in the pause
between life and death,
what has been and
what will become,
trapped between
purpose and futility
a tribute to
all seasons,
that share the trees



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2003-01-16 11:13 PM


I am fascinated with leaves too.

I once watched a seemingly dead leaf whirl in the wind just hanging on...and I kept watching, and it kept hanging on...twirling like a little windmill. Then someone called me to go inside, and I got up and saluted the damn thing, chuckle, saying ALOUD, "You outlasted ME."

Enjoyed this much lady. Made me remember that moment, and I thank you.

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-16 11:20 PM


Michelle, I like leaves on the trees, too. I like to look at the different shapes and sizes of leaves. They're pretty to me.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-01-16 11:24 PM


thanks , ladies,
i seem to have a strange obsession with them, i really feel them as they are born, and go through their life cycle,
i want to live in a warm place, but everytme i go to florida i come home and practically
kiss the trees up north

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-01-16 11:33 PM


Love this and the topic, i write about them from time to time and have a special affinity to them, maybe i'm an elf
bklynboy
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5 posted 2003-01-17 09:15 PM


The beauty of leaves is the renewal in spring. They hang on as a reminder of whats in the past only to be replaced by the hope of the future. Nice topic to write about!
vandana
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6 posted 2003-01-17 09:21 PM


enjoyed
passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-01-18 02:52 AM


awesome insight!
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