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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-01-16 05:45 PM


Sadness
Downhearted in darkness
Seemingly in a hole, looking out
of despair
Will the sun ever shine again
Will smiles and happiness come
someday
Circumstances can be cruel in
the turns
and curves down
this much traveled road of life



Then
Happiness comes
bringing joy, peace
Light of day
Ah, it feels so good to
be happy
after so long being
sad
without
You


Will you help me to stay happy for a while?



© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-16 05:58 PM


garysgirl, so much expression in your poem. Thank you for sharing. I wrote an acrostic with a similar title a while back. if you don't mind ,, here it is.

Happinness vs Sadness


            Humble
            Affection
            Persevering
            Peaceful
            Immeasurable
            Nourishing
            Enchanting
            Spontaneous
            Serenity

              vs

            Somber
            Abominable
            Desolate
            Never-ending
            Emptiness
            Surreal
            Solitude

NewEnglandlazurlu
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2 posted 2003-01-16 06:24 PM


Ethel, very creative and filled with much emotion. Loved it!!!

Hugs, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

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3 posted 2003-01-16 07:22 PM


how come i cant find different scripts and prints here, this was a nicely illustrated contrast,
Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-01-16 07:27 PM


lovely sentiment Ethel
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5 posted 2003-01-16 07:32 PM


wow enjoyed it a lot
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6 posted 2003-01-16 09:07 PM


Amature 2,
No, I don't mind at all. I really enjoyed reading it.
Have you posted it yet? I think others would like to read it, too.

And, thank you for your nice reply to me. I appreciate...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-01-16 09:08 PM


Thank you very much, Marti. I'm glad that you liked it.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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8 posted 2003-01-16 09:18 PM


Michelle,
Thank you for liking it.
About the color and the fonts.....
I tried to tell
somone in another thread how to do it on here, and it
wouldn't show up on the page. Do you want me to e-mail you
how to do the different ones? I'll be glad to, but I wanted
to ask, first.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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9 posted 2003-01-16 09:21 PM


Raph,
I'm really glad that you liked it.
Thank you...
.
.
.
Vandana,
I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for the "wow", too...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2003-01-16 09:56 PM


yes, ethel, i like to learn something new each day, thanks.
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11 posted 2003-01-16 09:59 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I will try my best, but you must also help me as I have this feeling inside me now! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I hope your heart forever shines with the happiness you deserve, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2003-01-16 11:29 PM


Noah, I've been feeling sad and depressed today really bad. I hate this feeling like I'm going to cry at the least little thing. I've been sick and taking antibiotics, so maybe I'll feel better when I can get out again. Staying inside nearly kills me, but with my lungs like they are, I get pneumonia really easy. So, I have to be careful.....

Thanks for being my friends, too...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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