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Open Poetry #24

Diamondized

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-16 09:07 AM

Diamondized

heated up
and polished
you shaped
yourself
until light
danced
through you
but when
the sun
left and
the rain stayed
your glass
fell apart
and you
were nothing more
than a castle
in the sand

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-01-16 09:19 AM

sounds like a cheap imitation..and you deserve better than that..

nicely written.... now I am off.. I must get on the road.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-01-16 09:21 AM

1slick_lady
Short and sweet, enjoyed.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2003-01-16 09:22 AM

This is just beautiful.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-01-16 09:50 AM

Just proves that 'diamonds' are not always a girl's best friend.
Well written, sad.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-01-16 10:16 AM

Helen...this reminded me of one that I've been working on for over a year now...enjoyed the quality of writing but the disappointment conveyed in word just aches...

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