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Open Poetry #24

Delicate (twenty or less)

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-01-16 04:36 AM

Silky to the touch
elegant of eye
fragile of so much
delicate to why
soft is such
my heart's reply

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-16 04:37 AM

definately!

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-01-16 07:28 AM

that tickled my heart. much beauty within that ctowen. thanks.
lots of love, gemmaxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-01-16 08:30 AM

A delicate vision indeed...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-01-16 09:04 AM

(sigh) Oh Craig, this is lovely, sweet friend, I love he rhye scheme in this as you make this twenty or less musical in sense too, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2003-01-18 12:16 PM

soft
my heart's reply

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-01-18 12:24 PM

fragile of so much
delicate to why

Less is more, you just proved it!

I have always loved you ability to express yourself so simply....beautiful!

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

7 posted 2003-01-19 01:08 PM

Hi ctowen,

I just loved this little/large piece of art, very much enjoyed and also saving.

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-01-19 01:12 PM

ctowen, this is just so beautiful. In fact it's a

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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