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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-01-16 01:57 AM


When I dream
I float on warm seas
endlessly seeking
the waves of your mind,
wanting to feel
where your thoughts
begin and end
as they circle 'round mine,
thrilling me, fulfilling me,
quenching my thirsting mind
and body as only you can do
in rising waves of purest passion.
You are beyond my lust for life
and death, submerged
within my deepest veins,
a nightstalker waiting
for the golden moment
to take me deep within
the inner core
of your being.
I become undone
as we melt
into
one.




© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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1 posted 2003-01-16 04:24 AM


I feel such waters ebbing my soul ...
      it pulls ever so softly.

Pleasant dreams my friend.

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2 posted 2003-01-16 04:36 AM


beautiful! I love this, good theme
Sandpiper
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3 posted 2003-01-16 05:09 AM


ahhhhh, perchance to dream--beautiful!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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4 posted 2003-01-16 05:58 AM


Midnitesun~ May all your dreams be this nice.
Tender write, enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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5 posted 2003-01-16 06:30 AM


Kacy,
i'm envious...we all should be this lucky!

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6 posted 2003-01-16 07:14 AM


This is great words..

I love your way of writing your thoughts...

Thanx alot...

HUGESSS


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7 posted 2003-01-16 07:17 AM


when  you feel them in your veins, you know youre hooked, i love and hate that feeling all at once,
loved this portrayal of it all

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8 posted 2003-01-16 07:18 AM


oooooo kacy, can you swap dreams with me?? i keep having nightmares, i want a swap with you. beautifully written kacy. liking this a lot.
perhaps some inspiration for me to have a nice dream eh? hope so, thanks for the write.
lots of love gem xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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9 posted 2003-01-16 09:02 AM


Craig, ebb is such a cool word

Dixieshadow,smiling, thanks

Sandpiper dreams, perchance smiling a thank you

Paul, love, always a poetic theme

kaile, muse dreams to you

secret, thank you frined

inked, yes, it thickens the blood

gem, hereby gifting you softer dreams

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10 posted 2003-01-16 09:46 AM


I like this. This is just beautiful.
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11 posted 2003-01-16 09:51 AM


Thanks, glad to have a chance to visit with you, Sue. Hope all is well.
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12 posted 2003-01-16 12:27 PM


Beautiful Kacy, when i dream i dream of two brunettes and whiiped cream and...oh nevermind lol
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13 posted 2003-01-16 12:30 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kacy, this is very lovely, sweet friend, I know this feeling and it can be so eerie when it all disappears as it has for me and wonder what camouflage wears underneath himself! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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14 posted 2003-01-16 12:51 PM


LOL, Raph, I NEVER have THAT dream.
Wait, two brunette men and ....
giggling.


Noah, you are the proverbial dreamer. Peaceful thoughts to you, always.

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