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Angel In Barefeet

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Aenimal
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Silken hair of darkened night
cascades around an angel face
eyes shimmered with life
A smile that wet's the lips
of one who thirsts for light as water
Though she is little
more than an image now
Painted longingly of memory
on a dream's canvas
Though
beyond reach
beyond hope
beyond reason
My love remains
always

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-15-2003 08:19 PM).]

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regards2you
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1 posted 01-15-2003 08:23 PM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you



Oh, I love this and especially the ending. Just precious. Always and forever. So touching.


Thanks for this,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 01-15-2003 10:22 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

You paint the canvas so well Raph~
Enjoyed the longing and the loverly
and all that remains ever after.

Pretty poem you wrote~
inkedgoddess
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i hope she'll come for you, just keep her near
if only inside for now
longing, loving and all that
Eliza
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A painting that hangs,
where?

Close?

Yes.
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(big hugggssssssss) This is so beautifully sensitive, sweet friend, know deep down true love will always exist in your heart which no thief can infiltrate your gallery and take the masterpiece away! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aenimal
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Thanks for the warmth Pat, I'm glad you were touched by it

Thanks so much Blues

Thanks for saying that M I gotta keep hope up that she or someone like her will

Eliza very true very true, welcome again

Thanks Noah good to see you again!

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-15-2003 10:58 PM).]

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ethereal...radiates enough warmth to feel, but it almost disappears as a tease when it comes near.

A wispy, wistful write!
Seymour Tabin
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Aenimal
A fair statement, enjoyed.
Aenimal
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K you picked that up eh? Of course you did oh mirrored one.

Thank you Seymour, glad you enjoyed it always nice to see you
Salty
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Love seems to have a way....of screwing with every emotion.  Doesn't seem to have to abide by any rules...does it?  


YOu captured the twist & turns very well in this write.

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

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I've never found the answer to a lost love, nor does the sense of loss easily diminish.

Liked your write.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Aenimal
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Creates it's rules as it goes along doesn't it Salty

Thank you Kayjay many no this sting
Dark Angel
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Though
beyond reach
beyond hope
beyond reason
My love remains
always


ahhhh yes Bello, my point exactly.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

 
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