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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-01-15 08:06 PM


“OVER THE MOON”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Meet me somewhere behind the moon,
I’ll take you to dreamland, yes indeed,
teach you things you didn’t know before,
when we’re done, you’ll have agreed…

I’ll take your hair, run my fingers through,
caressing it, as I would later caress you,
kiss soft lips, in ways even you don’t know,
these are some of the things I would do…

Your whispers would be only of deep sighs,
and your breath would be taken slowly away,
a gift I give, but come on, jump over the moon,
meet me on the backside, enter my bouquet…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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1 posted 2003-01-15 08:10 PM


As always, lovely..so filled with romance. It just kind of makes ya feel all warm when you read it.
NewEnglandlazurlu
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2 posted 2003-01-15 08:25 PM


There is nearly a full moon here tonight -- the 'wolf moon.' It is a good place to be!

Enjoyed this very much...hugs, Marti

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with our music still inside of us.

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-01-15 08:31 PM


Grinning...a delightful write. TD
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4 posted 2003-01-15 08:47 PM


Yes,  something tells me you would...Is the
moon out???

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5 posted 2003-01-15 08:52 PM


Oooh Bill, you and I are both staring up at the moon to-night. Lovely, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Nan
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6 posted 2003-01-15 08:57 PM


...You sure know how to talk to a lady, BCI...

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-01-15 09:12 PM


Bill,
I thought it was cold on the other side of the moon, LOL Enjoyed.

Chanson
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8 posted 2003-01-15 09:41 PM


Mr. Charles woos not only under the moonlight's glow but over it too. *s
It's nice to read you again.


When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

[This message has been edited by Chanson (01-15-2003 09:43 PM).]

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9 posted 2003-01-15 09:44 PM


Bill, so beautifully romantic....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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10 posted 2003-01-15 10:13 PM


i like it big time,
but im such a whore, i know it all, by now

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11 posted 2003-01-15 11:10 PM




(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, I only wish I could have a fairest rose of all to add to my bouquet, or sunflower perhaps so the thorn won't burst the blue balloon in my soul! (big hugggssssssss) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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