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Open Poetry #24

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-15 03:36 PM

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I have never
felt this pull
no nothing
like this
in the something
I don’t have
the thing
that I miss
I sit and think
remembering
the bath
of your touch
how that rain
changed the parched
soaking where
the dry
needed much
now there is
an aching
where a different
ache had been
a longing for
that liquid
that starts outside
to gently quench
within

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (01-16-2003 12:36 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-01-15 03:46 PM

(chuckling) I feel this way every evening before I have that first beer... I can't wait to let it soak in...

seriously... a very nicely done piece..

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