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Carried Away
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Carried Away |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Carried Away just the moon knows my secrets I whisper them late at night a one way conversation said a talk that flows in flight it is a verbal diary not one syllable written down just whispers sent across the sky my wishes carried away in sound "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
it is a verbal diary not one syllable written down I know what ya mean, being a 'sky-talker' myself. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a bit of a lonely feel to this..but it still speaks of a gentle telling..and perhaps a desire to have the telling remain between the moon and you.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
....Amazing.... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
i can't say it any better... 'amazing'.. enjoyed reading this for sure  The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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