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A wish to my star
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A wish to my star |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium 
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I remember way back, months before we met i asked a star to check, whether our destiny was set Beautiful and shiny, a rock so very tiny With a miracle filling my view, i wished..asking for you After months, after giving up all hope the star must have decided, with me he'd co'pe for one day I saw you out there Smiling and shivering and looking so fair That day our story had found it's very first line and my special star wore a new glittering shine Even now, when I long for you and the missing makes me sad I go outside knowing my star will make me glad In times of smiles, in times of tears my star will be there, each and every year You and my star, both precious to me Near and far, both of you I long to see I love you..and my star I adore for it made my wish come true and brought you to my door The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely...much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lovely thoughts... and I too enjoyed the read. |
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Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Touching... Of all I've lost; I miss my innocence the most. |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
nancy, cpat and ada' ... thanks for taking the time to read my work and reply  warm smiles and hugs kelly. The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
how nice to feel the stars in your eyes, enjoyed |
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