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Waiting On Tomorrow
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Waiting On Tomorrow |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Waiting On Tomorrow night’s lace wraps me like a secret a size too small where my skin feels its kisses in the spaces your presence is on every wall here where you have been painted in light hues you are here but sleeping in another bed alone and through space your whispers soften my loneliness anticipating tomorrow "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done..concise..and the images as well as the thoughts strong... as usual..I enjoyed...and admire the tight form you use..wasting no word and weaving it all together tightly... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
May I echo Cpat Hair...? My feelings exactly on this piece Helen... not one word wasted....lovely, much enjoyed. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Beautiful... Thanx4this treasure of a read... Hugs2uPoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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