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Open Poetry #24

Roar

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

0 posted 2003-01-15 01:35 AM

Roar

Rumbling, bumbling, crashing on rocks anf rolling over leaves,
The Roar comes down and moves up.
Druming brambles rearing daring rushing approaching from all four sides.
Out of My chest - no deeper,
My bosom - no deeper,
My heart - no deeper!
My core - Yes! Yes!
From the canyons of depression echoing against the sheer walls,
To the snowy peeak of my avalanche proned elation -
Evergrowing, ever grumbling, rroom boom groaning ever rrrrroaring!
The Roar!

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-15 02:18 AM

well done!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-01-15 01:57 PM

Hey majnu - Have you posted this one in the Workshop? I think the others in there would really enjoy it... Nice imagery..

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2003-01-15 04:59 PM

thank you both for the read and feedback.

nan, no I have not. I posted another that I felt was more pure imagery.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

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