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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-01-14 10:43 PM



Picture by Jim Warren

* * * *

My life has been enriched
By this special love we share
Just being there for one another
We show how much we care

You cannot put a price
On a love so true and kind
You fill each waking moment
For you are always on my mind

I'd give to you the world
If the world was mine to give
Whenever I'm in your presence
My life is such a joy to live

At night I search the heavens
And as I view the scene above
I thank my lucky stars
For sending me your love

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-01-14 10:48 PM


Oh so beautiful and very romantic Sue!
Excellent write poetess.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-01-14 10:53 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I only wish I could give all my love right now as my stars are just shrapnel in my heavens! (sad sigh) I wish for your golden heart to be forever touched by love though, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-15 02:34 AM


lemme tell ya...you are one of the most romantic women I have ever known.
garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-15 02:37 AM


Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful!!!!

What more can I say??
You know I love it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-15-2003 02:38 AM).]

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-01-15 04:54 AM


Enjoy the Love...James
winston
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6 posted 2003-01-15 09:29 AM


Another antipodean cousin! Well, Suetang, this is like a song. Thanks.

"am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak

Nan
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7 posted 2003-01-15 11:05 AM


Perfectly said... I love it...

NewEnglandlazurlu
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8 posted 2003-01-15 08:13 PM


Sue, this is BEAUTIFUL. And what a great picture.

"...You cannot put a price
On a love so true and kind..."

Anyone who has this kind of love, has a love for a lifetime.

Hugs to you and Andrew...Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

Paul Wilson
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9 posted 2003-01-16 02:26 AM


Sue~ Your magical words will surly cast a spell on your man. You are always so easy to read, the flow is like a smooth slow stream throught the countryside.Enjoyed..Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

vlraynes
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10 posted 2003-01-17 02:52 AM



Absolutely beautiful, Sue, and perfectly said.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

enchantingvamp
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11 posted 2003-01-17 07:38 AM


One of the best descriptions of love I've ever read, fabulous picture by the way.

smiles

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

SmartChick
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12 posted 2003-01-17 08:58 AM


Sue, I truely love to read your poetry of romance. It is always so beautiful. And, I love this picture too. Real true love is a wonderful thing to have.
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