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rm711
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since 2002-11-30
Posts 131
Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-01-14 02:59 PM



It could be worse
But that doesn’t stop it hurting
And the worst of it all
Is that I don’t even know
Why it hurts so bad

Why I’m broken
So badly broken
And the pieces are scattered
I’ve lost what made me myself
That’s what I lived for

No matter what
I have to keep smiling
For all the people who matter
It matters to me
That they don’t know I hurt

I don’t want to be trouble
I don’t want concern
I don’t know what I want anymore

I just need to get away for a moment
To the places of my dreams
Where my pain is numbed
By the power of my imagination
And where I’m in control
Because right now
I need to sleep.

small insignificant useless me

© Copyright 2003 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
Nikolette Sadness
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port richey fl.
1 posted 2003-01-14 03:02 PM


no one is small or insignificant...i want you to know that...great write

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Ada'doLisdo'ti
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since 2002-12-10
Posts 123
California
2 posted 2003-01-14 04:09 PM


Great write, touching.

" This will pass to, with time.."

enchantingvamp
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since 2002-12-21
Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!
3 posted 2003-01-14 05:06 PM


I think you should let people know how you feel, un resolved feelings tend to become acid with time...they eat away at everything until nothing is left but rust.....Jewell said her hands were small, they're not yours, they are my own, no one is small or useless, keep writing, it helps.

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2003-01-15 03:32 AM


I agree with all of the above here...keep writing it all out!
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2003-01-15 07:19 AM


rm711,
if you need to sleep then do so, but ware the dreams. When you wake write it out again until the pain is all gone.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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