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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2003-01-13 11:57 PM


I see your face molded in cloud
As I tilt my head upward
(closer to you)

I sense you in soft wisps of shadow
As twilight curls around the day
(embracing me)

I hear you in the breath of night
As your spirit lingers in star-glow
(drifting near)

I witness your art
In every streak of rainbow
(canvassing the sky)

I believe love transcends time
And reaches the Heavens
(delivered to you)

And so I know
That you live on
In every moment of now
And forever.

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2003-01-14 01:03 AM


like your style
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2 posted 2003-01-14 04:21 AM


Wow... beautiful
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3 posted 2003-01-14 04:47 AM


very very beautiful and encouraging, enjoyed this very much!

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4 posted 2003-01-14 06:42 AM


isnt it nice when you see someone everywhere?lovely poem
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5 posted 2003-01-14 08:28 AM


...Smiling here...

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6 posted 2003-01-14 09:05 AM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Krista, this made me cry as I could almost hear my love whispering reading this though now she doesn't live in my heart anymore! (sad sigh) I wish for this joy to always fill your deserving heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2003-01-14 09:46 AM


nicely done... very nice indeed. The spiritual blends with the personal....

good stuff

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8 posted 2003-01-14 10:19 AM


This is just beautiful.......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Alwye
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In the space between moments
9 posted 2003-01-14 10:18 PM


Thank you all for reading and replying...I'm still using writing to deal with my emotions after the death of a close friend...her brother spoke at her funeral and said that she would always be an artist and he would see her paint every time he saw a rainbow...the idea for this poem spun from that beautiful speech.  Once again, thank you all for your kindness.  

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

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10 posted 2003-01-21 02:39 AM



Krista~
This is so beautiful.
I'm glad to see you writing through this hard time.
Big hugs to you,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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11 posted 2003-01-21 08:37 AM


This is a very touching tribute to Erin.  Im glad that I had the opportunity to read it.

Keith M.

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