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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Unanswered Questions Why does it seem that my words must fall upon deaf ears? Can you not hear these cries of my anquish? Your eyes see to the very core of my pain, but yet you chose to advert them so that you may simply look through it, rather than having to look at it. Has your heart become blind to the love that is surrounding you that you can no longer feel it's warmth? Do you remember yesterday? You laughed more back then than what you do now.... Have you forgotten how? The colors were brighter, the images........much sharper. Are things as clear as they used to be back then, or has the focus changed so much that everything seen appears to be clouded? Have you forgotten me? Have you forgotten us? When my heart speaks to you, will you remember? Will you hear? She didn't cry, she didn't shout, I was blind but I see now...she was breaking from the inside out.....(sung by Tracey Lawrence) I know that you can 'read' me but can you 'hear' "me"? [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-14-2003 08:13 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"Have you forgotten me? Have you forgotten us? When my heart speaks to you, will you remember? Will you hear?" in the ending you asked those questions that no one but the other can answer... seems to be a very pesonal and painful write for you... hugs for the hurt... and the sincere wish that things indeed work out for you as you wish them to... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Another write from yesterday before the reality of the entire situation was given.... now there is even more anguish, but I will deal with it and pray he finds his peace. Thanks, and I really needed the hugs....thank you.......very much... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Donna, I know this feeling ever so well, sweet friend, I feel my old sweetheart Joanna has changed as a person and has forgotten that she loved me and I truly loved her and all she used to believe in is gone! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way, sweet firend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
  from me to you |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
LOTs of HUGS headed your way...a painful write...hope he opens his ears...and that I am not asking too much...I don't think you are.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Donna....such a sad write. Bushels of hugs coming your way sweetie. E-mail me if you need an ear. ~Luv & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thanks to all......I am trying to cope...... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Donna, This is so heart touching. May you find strength, insight and truth as you go through this difficult period. My prayers are with you. God bless you and keep you and give you peace of mind. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Donna, I have asked myself these same questions. I wish I knew the answer. |
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angelfriend Member
since 2003-01-11
Posts 52Michigan USA |
I too give you warm hugs and wishes that you can resolve this. It is hard to hope that love can conquer all, when it looks like it is doubtful or that you aren't reaching that other person. Our toughest life lessons are often in those moments and situations. May you come through this wiser and may joy come to you soon. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Has your heart become blind to the love that is surrounding you that you can no longer feel it's warmth? Dear Donna, Even in your sadness your gentle spirit remains constant and my heart breaks to read of your pain. Hold your head up gal, I'm rooting for you! Hugs dear one~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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MAF Junior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 15 |
Sorry to read the pain that is seeping through every word here. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all my friends....today there are very few words, and many, many God Bless you all for your thoughts.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and you're going to be just fine... it only hurts for a little while... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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