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quik
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since 2002-11-27
Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia

0 posted 2003-01-13 12:52 PM


Dreams never finished
They often tell a fairy tail
Dreams can be astonishing
Through light of heaven
And darkness of hell
They begin with dragons and knights
Swords and fights
But they also can be about little girls in the forest
And wolves that hunt in the night
Fantasies of all sorts that bunch up into one big ball
And all of great things is the best of them all
Stories still untold
They wait for the right time
They began to unfold
Trying on the same line
And when the storie ends
Its often a big suprise
Sometimes i like to read the story again
I always seem to compromise
The End

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-01-14 07:45 PM


quik,
I like the way you read and learn, as I read and learn from your poetry.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
Posts 172
Monticello IN
2 posted 2003-01-18 12:37 PM


Nice!

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-01-18 02:05 AM


stories sometimes never end...yes
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