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Unexpected Call
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Unexpected Call |
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quik Member
since 2002-11-27
Posts 91Dinwiddie,Virginia |
The night falls beneath the cold yet humid sky Tress whistling in the air Sounds like song Leaves brushing the gray concrete pavement Like sweeping the dirty floor Lights off Lights dim Nobody is around Except one person A person who couldnt sleep Only he couldnt sleep ever again By this unexpected call Ring.....ring......ring Hello?? Who is this?? Not a sound to be heard Then a knock on the door Noone to be found The phone rings once more Hello??? Who is this? Why dont you look outside your window and tell me what you see, says the errie phone caller I see nothing but cats and old dumpsters Why dont you look harder and tell me what you see Suddenly a knock at the door A guy with a black trench coat covered with blood The guy in the house was terrified seeing this man trenched in someones blood Ww...wwhat do you want? I have nothing!!! Get away from me!! Somebody help He tries calling the police But... no dial tone He tries screaming out the window Noone in sight All he could do is stand there and cry for help Ring.....ring.. Everything is over now |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
quik What can one say, bad dreams happen. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Antonio, I hope it was only a bad dream????? It was very desciptive....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
ooooh I like those little mystery type reads.....pretty eerie stuff. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
gee, i was thinking of going to take a nap but i think i'll surf ebay instead, so well written now i cant sleep....grins. |
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