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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2003-01-13 07:35 AM



I have been hosea ten times
and never obedient
but have missed the women of wind
as though they were children

there are thick pages there
and I have dreamed they spoke
not with words but with neon
and grooves that fit my affliction

she will drift away with the clouds
the sun will take all but her outline
and I will put my hand to my face
to look at her between fingers

as the stones were people then
when they were young under the sky
eventually they will be again
when they become dust in water

I will be hosea again and listen

©Dark


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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-01-13 07:59 AM


last line does well...

enjoyed as usual...

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-01-13 08:45 AM



Knowing what
Hosea means in the
literal sense
enlightens this piece
tenfold...

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2003-01-13 08:54 AM




(sigh) How beautiful it is to see something that looks digitally enhancing but is actual size and organic in its beauty! (big hugggsssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-01-13 09:01 AM


Dark Stranger
Hosea is hard to follow, enjoyed.

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
5 posted 2003-01-13 06:27 PM


He's baaaaaaack!

nice one.

Cor

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2003-01-14 01:43 PM


You really do amaze, I have never come across anyone, that can touch poetry like you do.....
L~

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
7 posted 2003-01-14 01:56 PM


Nobody writes like you DS....nobody.
~Hugs & Winks, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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