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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-13 05:09 AM

Once more cast down
on knees raw from prayer
to ask When?
When does my time come?
My soul already spread too thin
a shadows cast at setting sun
before the darkness
blankets everything
I am alone
I am forgotten
I am painfully
me...

sorry a moment of weakness...

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-13-2003 05:43 AM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2003-01-13 06:51 AM

i dont know if you want the pep talk or the
wake up smack,
but i feel the pain , too,
and its expressed well, so that much i can offer

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-01-13 08:01 AM

we all have moments of weakness... and you express it well here. Guess the trick in some ways is to keep on...even when it seems like it isn't going to ever happen..

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-01-13 12:49 PM

understanding is good enough M

I know cpat, just a momentary lapse of reason

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-13-2003 03:49 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-01-13 02:59 PM

Once more cast down
on knees raw from prayer
to ask When?
When does my time come?
My soul already spread too thin
a shadows cast at setting sun
=======================

never apologize for purging...its a must for a poet...
powerful words poet sir...and achingly touching write---well done.

It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe.
Trying to see where it all began, she'll never be the same again.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-01-13 03:50 PM

Thank you Janet very kind words i appreciate them

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-01-13 03:53 PM

we seem to be on the same page Raph...except I get MAD at me...

chuckle? sigh.

y'can shrink my head later.

Hugs.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-01-13 08:59 PM

Raph, I think you expressed your feelings very well....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

angelfriend
Member

since 2003-01-11

Posts 52
Michigan USA

8 posted 2003-01-13 11:16 PM

I agree - don't apologize for putting down the truth of your feelings. That is the entire reason for poetry. We have to get it out sometimes! I can so relate to your words. I was feeling something so similar last weekend. Loneliness and self-pity overcame me. It is hard to fight those feelings when they take over. You expressed it so well.

"The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

9 posted 2003-01-13 11:25 PM

Enjoyed this moment of truth and honesty; you, saying what many feel.

Very courageous, you are...

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-01-14 01:16 AM

your time will come, when it's due

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