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jytree
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0 posted 2003-01-13 12:40 PM



There it was,
I missed my chance,
Now I'm living on the pieces of a stolen romance,

There it was,
And now it's gone,
The roses fell to the ground,
Dead and gone is where they lay,

So now I look with tears in my eyes,
I was hopeing for atleast a single goodbye,
But just like the sun she faded away,

So now here I am back again,
Feeling useless with no friends,
Cause they all put the knife in my back,
Surley and sadly that is a fact,

But I forgive and move on for now,
For I go to a place,
Were I can find God's amazing grace,

And I then I will look back and think,
There it was,
But here I am happy and free


Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel



© Copyright 2003 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
jytree
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1 posted 2003-01-13 12:43 PM


I hope you all like this one it is kind of ruff but my life is stressed at this point but God is working it out so I am ok but my flow has been messed up with my writing so just Pray for me whoever thanks
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2 posted 2003-01-13 01:09 AM


You'll be fine. Take a deep breath and keep writing.
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3 posted 2003-01-13 04:36 AM


the sun rises just like it sets...keep your eyes open
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4 posted 2003-01-13 08:05 AM


Happy and free is all that it's really about... Nicely said...
jytree
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5 posted 2003-01-13 02:17 PM


I am gald that you all liked it thanks
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