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scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

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0 posted 2003-01-12 08:30 PM

In the Moonlight

I see you in the moonlight.
Your lithe shadow on the wall.
You drift into my dreams at night.
Softly my name you call.

I sense your perfumed body heat
As an invitation to join me.
Our bodies passionately meet
As our desires rise like tides of sea.

Using the eyes from God to see you..
Fingertips that long to touch
Lips that tenderly kiss you true
With a heart that loves you so much.

Stars twinkling overhead in the night
As we hold each other til dawn's first light.

believe in what your heart feels...

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (01-12-2003 08:48 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-01-12 08:34 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me cry to imagine me holding my true love under the stars, who I long ever so much to hold her hand for the first time! (sad sigh) I wish for this happiness to always bask upon you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-12 08:40 PM

Scorpio, this is so beautiful. I love it....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-01-12 08:43 PM

Nicely done, yes...very nicely... (You do
have two words run together..."Usingthe")
Thought ya might want to know...)

scorpio
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4 posted 2003-01-12 08:43 PM

Noah..I'm sorry if my poem made you cry...very sorry..but I glad for your kind comments..

Thank you,Ethel...glad you like it..

believe in what your heart feels...

scorpio
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5 posted 2003-01-12 08:46 PM

Thank you, Barry...for your read and comments...and thanks for the headsup on the word jam..

believe in what your heart feels...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-01-12 08:50 PM

what a beutiful peom,
i wish i was the moon

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
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7 posted 2003-01-12 09:15 PM

Thank you, inkedgoddess...shine on through the dark of night..

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-01-12 11:08 PM

Scorpio~You are quickly becoming quite the romantic charmer here at Passions.
This has a very dreamlike quality...tranquil, relaxing and oh so romantic.
Very nicely penned poet sir.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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9 posted 2003-01-13 04:42 AM

a true romantic!

scorpio
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Posts 5178
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10 posted 2003-01-13 08:28 AM

Enchantress, thank you...you flatter me..I write as my muse inspires my heart...and in composing this poem she played a major part...your thoughts on this write warms my soul..

Thank you, Passing Shadows...much appreciated your kind words..

believe in what your heart feels...

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