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ForGetMeNot087
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since 2002-12-08
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0 posted 2003-01-12 06:16 PM


Fear

Some say I worry to much
but, it's just my hearts in a bunch.
I care for my friends
And that I can't mend,
That they fight,
But not for whats right.
I cry inside,
As time abides.
For I fear
That the time is near,
When I'll be stuck in the middle,
And unable to solve this riddle.
Im lost in there maze
and far from their gaze.


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ForGetMeNot087
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since 2002-12-08
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1 posted 2003-01-12 06:18 PM


oops i messed up on my wonerfull typing. I ment  ' their ' not there in the last line
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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2 posted 2003-01-12 06:29 PM


Great write poet!
I think this is the toughest of spots for friends.  Hope it all works out well. ThisDiamond

Magnus
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3 posted 2003-01-12 06:31 PM


Your words are filled with your thoughts
and I hope things work out...

Regarding your "there" mistake,  you can go
into Edit/delete msg (an Icon at the top of
your message that looks like a notepad and
a pencil)  and change the word,  then go
to the bottom and submit the change. (Submit Now Button)
That will fix it for you...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (01-12-2003 06:41 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-01-12 07:18 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) This is touching, sweet friend, I understand how you're feeling but believe you should always follow your heart and even if you encounter a predicament, to do what you must will be more rewarding than not doing anything! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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