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A Haiku in Winter
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A Haiku in Winter |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA 
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Gusts of winter winds Lifting fallen faded leaves To new heights of joy. Shenachie |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
leaves continue on unyielding to times passing ride along the wind |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely. Much enjoyed! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I like this. It's very pretty....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done Bridget, excellent form and flow to it...fits well.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Just love this ~~ haiku's are one of my very favorite... hugs, Marti Most of us go to our grave |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile to see the leaves dancing in the zephyr! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Louise, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done...very uplifting.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I love that sort of stuff. Thank you for lifting us to new heights! I am living proof that ghosts exist. Which is an oximoron but I don't care ;) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aha... thought you could slip this one past me didn't you? |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Fallen leaves nestle In earthen blanket of snow Awaiting springs bloom |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you, much enjoyed. Made me smile  SimplyGold |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
made me want to be a leaf....i'm thinking ok so even if it is winter at least if i were a leaf i wouldnt be half chilled to death, or would I? Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Leaves are like dreams They fade and they fly I know not where I know not why. Wonderful Haiku! Thank you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bridget, Well done, enjoyed. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Love the windy image. Can't wait till it's a warm summer breeze. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Skirts of twirling leaves lifted high in pierotte, landing gracefully. Nature's overture playing notes of Winter's song soften for the spring. Oh this could go on and on, and on - loved this Bridget. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Louise How lovely to see you here again as you delight us with such a beautiful, uplifting verse. I hope all is well with you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bridget - and they float silently on the wind... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
excellent turn about in the last line! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Autumn's leaves unboughed Upon crests of winter winds Settling for spring |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Thanks to all of you for reading and responding. Your response is very heartwarming in these winter months. And for those of you adding additional haikus--WOW! Shenachie |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
beautiful |
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