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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-01-12 03:45 PM



I'm put upon by the ghosts
of pictures past

the   p a s s a g e   of years
betrayed now in frame
it's not the same
and I mourn  
    the loss of beauty
as the vision
now is flawed,


and the unrehearsed pose
shows the pain that follows me...

it's too much to see
this state of aged me

I'm torn with the pictures
in pieces

that
    d
     o
      n
       't

    fit.

WhiteRose 1/11/03

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2003-01-12 06:22 PM


You always express so well these inner conflicts...the truth is my friend, that true beauty never fades...but we must see it if it is to be seen. ThisDiamond
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-01-12 06:53 PM


kick its ass, and it'll pass, really don't give in to it.
youre fine........like me, aged wine,

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