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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-01-12 09:31 AM



Your Eyes

In the quiet dark
When moon reflects in your eyes
I seek your essence..


believe in what your heart feels...

[This message has been edited by Enchantress (01-12-2003 09:36 AM).]

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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-01-12 09:33 AM


seeing the moon in his eyes, what else is there?
very pretty poem

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2 posted 2003-01-12 09:39 AM



I swear...
this was a weep
of scent...

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3 posted 2003-01-12 09:42 AM




Scorpio,

Ah, so lovely and so loving.


Hugs and warm regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

scorpio
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4 posted 2003-01-12 09:53 AM


There is nothing better,inkedgoddess...the glow from moonlight is unsurpassed...thank you..

Karilea...that's a beautiful phrase "weep of scent"...thank you for your read..

Thank you, Pat...I'm glad you stopped by...your comments were appreciated..

believe in what your heart feels...

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5 posted 2003-01-12 10:42 AM


Beautiful. Just beautiful.
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6 posted 2003-01-12 10:43 AM


I love the moon, especially when reflected in those special eyes--beautiful!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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7 posted 2003-01-12 10:48 AM



the glow within you
reflected by the moonbeams
captivates my eyes

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8 posted 2003-01-12 10:48 AM


Scorpio,  enjoyed the soft moonlit passion
of this..Much truth in your thoughts.

scorpio
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9 posted 2003-01-12 10:59 AM


Thank you, Serenity...Glad you liked it..

Yes the moon reflection looks so beautiful in my love's eyes...thank you, Sandpiper..

Exactly, Midnightsun...you've seen it too..


Thank you, Barry...your comments are very much appreciated..

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2003-01-12 11:06 AM


Scorpio, such beauty in so few words......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

scorpio
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11 posted 2003-01-12 12:40 PM


Thank you,Ethel...I do enjoy writing these senyrus...the challenge for me is counting the syllables..I should have paid more attention in grade three!!

believe in what your heart feels...

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12 posted 2003-01-12 01:13 PM


Ah Scorpio...you are becoming an expert with this style.
Sounds as though your love's eyes are quite beautiful..
And I am sure her essence pleasures you!
Well done and much enjoyed!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

scorpio
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13 posted 2003-01-12 01:41 PM


Yes Nancy, she has the eyes of an angel...bright, all seeing and sparkling...everything about her pleasures me...your encouragement and support means so very much to me...you do inspire me with your creativity and talent...thank you sweet Enchantress..

believe in what your heart feels...

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14 posted 2003-01-12 08:39 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) This is so lovely, sweet friend, I wish for loves tears of crystal joy to always fall from your eyes gazing into your sweethearts world! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

scorpio
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15 posted 2003-01-12 08:47 PM


Thank you, Noah...your support and friendship mean a great deal to me..

believe in what your heart feels...

Bill Charles
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16 posted 2003-01-12 09:17 PM


scorpio - few words, meaningful thoughts. Very nice write...

BC

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17 posted 2003-01-12 09:23 PM


Thank you, Bill...glad you enjoyed it..

believe in what your heart feels...

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18 posted 2003-01-12 09:48 PM


This is truly lovely scorpio. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

scorpio
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19 posted 2003-01-12 10:05 PM


Chris...thank you for stopping by...nice to see you..

believe in what your heart feels...

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