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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
So, lover of mine you want to know me you want to ask me questions to probe my heart explore my soul? Know that I don't talk much I like to listen more than I speak Know that my written word is always stronger than my speech Probe that Baby |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
*smiles*!! enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you drove your point home with the power of your words,nice one |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I'll be back to this one....It gave me pause. ~wranx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm a listener too...good write! Nice last line! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Definitely, without question...in the 10 ring of the target... your written words speak strongly, clearly... |
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angelfriend Member
since 2003-01-11
Posts 52Michigan USA |
Nice one! That last line is hysterical. I was thinking as I read your poem how a lover shouldn't have to ask questions or even read a written word to know you. They just have to look into your soul and know your truths. "The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
thanx guys for the comments to me, my written word is my soul |
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