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Witch Of The Cypress
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Witch Of The Cypress |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WITCH OF THE CYPRESS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Dark shadows reign dancing in the mist, soft breezes of your breath caressing, touching lips soft beckoning for yours, pressing exhilaration, slowly abducting… Minds are senseless with subtle desires, purple martins heard at dusk to sing, yet the night creeps in its darkness, owls screech, beguiling in their calling… I see you here, then there, feeling you, touching, tender sighs of whispers burning, chants said, unheard of in years of thousands, melodic songs told, sung with your thirsting… Shadow witch of the cypress swamp you are, whirling, slipping, sliding, slithering through, into this warlocks heart of steel cold ice, warming it, stirring it, with passions for you… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (01-12-2003 09:14 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It sounds as if someone has captured you. Nice write, Bill. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I still like it, I don't care which one you put up here on the boards...They are both just fine in my opinion.. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
wow, is this the darker side of bill; a little gothic romance? |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill... Enjoyed the tenderness of this. One question, should the word marlins be martins? I'm not one for pointing out these things, it just caught my eye...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, this is romatic with a spooky feel....HeeHee!! But, like Barry said, I like all that you post...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It's always so romantic what you write Bill. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I can feel the romantic shadows, and hear the lapping waters. This is lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
HUGE SMILES. You capture the scene from Cypress Park so beautifully. Gorgeous... I'll have to take pictures to post. It IS much like that. When the fog hangs in the field, I feel the presence of pirates. So glad that you are feeling better m'friend. You have a lovely romantic touch with your quill and? You just made my night. Thank you.  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Bill this is really good... Thanx dearPoetFriend4this sweet read... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a character you've created! I love it! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is sooooooo hauntingly beautiful, sweet friend, love can be eerie but in a harmless way, I love it, your creative mind always shines with magic, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sssssssssssssssssssssssss.... tambourine behind my back....  so so sweet...dancing to the undertones now. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, Not sure how I missed this one. It is fantastic. I enjoyed each and every descriptive line, woven through, of course, always the romance... Very well written, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
BC, such descriptive words that I felt I was lurking about in the foggy swamp. Seems your witch came out of the mist and captured your heart. Hugs, Marti |
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