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dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26
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Missouri,USA

0 posted 2003-01-11 09:15 PM



A gloom three-hundred
ninety five days later
I'm still the lover
your still the hater
silence speaks volumes


Yesterday the phone rang
it's message calls me back
to the north
t'witch you are from
while here in the south
I searched for comfortably numb
Gee, are we...havin fun yet?


Should I go?
I have no choice
Have my fears
listening to the voice
of extracting tears
once more
silent death...awaits me


One more dance
seems owed to my soul
for the dreams of silent jesters
I have come to know


Your cuts are sharp
as I dance with the memories
I'll bleed to the left
bleed to the right
hearing your harp
play drift away
over and over
in my mind


And one last time, I shall bleed
thank my Lord, for all I receive
Gee...are we...havin fun yet?


Copyright © 2001 Dennis Hicks
12/2/01

[This message has been edited by dhicks03 (01-11-2003 09:17 PM).]

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2003-01-11 09:18 PM


Wow. Now THAT's powerful.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

dhicks03
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since 2002-12-26
Posts 267
Missouri,USA
2 posted 2003-01-11 09:22 PM


Thank you so much Nan for your warm comments
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