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When The Last Leaf Falls
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When The Last Leaf Falls |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Another September comes Shorter days Red setting suns Where would I be without your spurious memory? Anticipating another October wind? Awaiting the fall, without your essence captivating my senses? Shall I dance with the ghost of yesterdays past? Or forget a love that seems will forever last? Engrained in the stars Carved in the scars The blood flowing...like a river of tears The tree of life will sway in the breeze Several prayers still to be whispered will come from the knees And perhaps one day We'll find a way To forget...the unforgettable End to the end...when...the last leaf falls © 2002 Dennis Hicks 9/16/02 |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is very effective. It feels like a whisper of sadness, a mist of regret. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
seems you never forget. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Your poem tugs at the core of my heart... Thank you4sharing this most touching write... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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