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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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To be the palest flower on the wall and have you notice… would put me in Eden before the fall. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-11-2003 06:09 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - okay..okay....so it's perfect...I'll give you everything I own for your muse!!!  Mine has run off with a rude little munchkin. love this sweet poetess. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH WOW!!!! Fantastic!! Sorry...that's all that comes out! You just made me throw my pens down! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your words |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Karilea, this is very nice. I wish I could write like you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BUTTTTT...you are not the palest flower on the wall... Who could ever not notice you, with the silver tipped pen of yours gracing our eyes with such thoughts... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
oooooo i agree with magnus. too full of light to ever be pale. kept re reading this one, i like very much! clever clever lady! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Ahhhhh, So Short, yet Sooooo Sweet. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A sweet little volume...spoke so large to me. Smiles from ThisDiamond |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - your words, your words, tells of the yearning of many. How true they are... BC |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Very sweet this read Sunshine... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, someone noticing the "little things" that may be over-looked by most, is what makes you feel really special, isn't it? I know..and he does.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i feel like i'm in love again... cause the little things.. like your short and delightful poem here... are sending my heart a flutter... man i hate being in love... *sigh* makes me feel so vulnerable. great lil piece here. light on the words, heavy on the pictures. New Year's Resolution #1: Cultivate a less vindictive cricle of enemies. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
So few words to express so much!  Shenachie |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
And you beyond the pale above a fall and lovely I've no doubt against a wall. Enjoyed |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karilea~You will never be the palest flower on the wall. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (01-13-2003 02:37 AM).] |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
I love this, it's short, honest, right in your face! bravo! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Karilea, You did great with your less is best theory and proved it. I think Enchantingvamp said it best. You should be very proud of yourself. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
little picture that is infinite inside muy coolo pale is nice...D |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wallflower? Doubt it... you bloom to lovely here for any to say such about you... as for the notice... I have no doubt you are noticed. |
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