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rm711
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since 2002-11-30
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Wiltshire, England

0 posted 2003-01-11 05:25 PM



I’ve learnt to mask myself
So that all you see
Is the smile in me

Even when I hit rock bottom
You just see me smiling
Then you don’t have to feel the hurt

Because my pain
Goes so deep down
I don’t think you’d fight it
You’d stay in the fire and burn

This way you never have to be sorry
You never need to see my tears
And this burden has not been lifted
It was just never there

I know you will never
Have to feel scared for me
If I feel bad
I will mask the hurt
And you will hear my delusive word

I don’t mean to be crooked
I would never choose to lie
Especially not to you
My only relief from hurt

I just hope you understand
My distorted smile
Was all for you.

"Some men see things as they are and say why? I dream things that never were and say why not?"
Rosie Mitchell

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-01-11 09:35 PM


Maybe he wants to see past that? Maybe let him see the real you? I'll bet he can handle more than you might think Rosie.
angelfriend
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since 2003-01-11
Posts 52
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2 posted 2003-01-11 09:36 PM


Very deep words. I can imagine the smile masking the emotions behind it.

"The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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