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Ada'doLisdo'ti
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since 2002-12-10
Posts 123
California

0 posted 2003-01-11 04:01 PM


Too many years wasted on one thought.
The happiness I thought you brought.
Into my life for so long a time.
To let you leave I thought was a crime.

You stabbed me till I let go.
I thought you'd change now I know.
I couldn't make you love only me.
After you removed the knife I let you leave.

All the years I thought were wasted,
Are in the back of my mind with the pain I tasted.
Had to let you go or slowly continue dieing.
Now I spend nights alone crying.

Too many years wasted on one thought.
The happiness I thought you brought.
Into my life for so long a time.
To let you leave I thought was a crime.


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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-01-11 04:30 PM


oh damn! This is truly ME!
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-01-11 06:11 PM


it seems like a waste, but it was what it was at the time
very well expressed

Barbara Trautman
Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 90

3 posted 2003-01-11 06:40 PM


So sad! B
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