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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-01-11 03:39 PM

I'd kill
to have
the missing of you
bled
from my today.
I don't know
what
every cell
is asking.
too many
requests
that flow
in unison
with
anger.
clotting my thoughts
preventing
focus
upon
the wound
of your
selfisness.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-01-11 03:55 PM

Swirling confusion might be two words to
describe part of these feelings...

Hope they all come into place...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-01-11 04:19 PM

Seems that no matter how hard we try our efforts are not always enough,
the message has a way of getting lost, and I think that ends up hurting us more.

I hope it works out for you~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-11 04:22 PM

Gemma, I feel the emotions in this one. Are you feeling this way, or is it about someone else?
Either way, I hope things get better....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-01-11 04:26 PM

wow...very powerful write! I liked this one!

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

5 posted 2003-01-11 05:19 PM

good job Gemma! Allthough I have to say this is a truely different side of you.

Never be normal!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-01-11 05:24 PM

gemjop
Interesting read.

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

7 posted 2003-01-11 07:35 PM

Magnus - yes, confusion to say the least. it's a feeling of limbo. i know what i'm feeling, but then i don't at the same time.
thanks for the reply.

Blues serenade - so true. theres nothing more i can do, but to keep on trying. and to try and stop feeling so angry! thanks for your concern, and for replying.

Ethel - friend, unfortunately, i am feeling this way. Its been a tough, emotional week. my patience is wearing thin. with myself and others. one in particular. thankyou too for your concern. i'll most definately be ok though, i'll try and write it out my system.

Dixie, glad you liked, even though its filled with the horrible aching thoughts that are filling my days lately, i like this one, it sums it all up for me. very theraputic.

thanks Liz, i know, i suppose i'm normally all lovey dovey in my writing. well, i've got plenty more where this came from, let me assure you. nice to see you around more often liz, glad ur back! thanks for the reply.

Seymour, always a pleasure to have you read and reply. so thankyou friend.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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