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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
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Belgium

0 posted 2003-01-11 01:44 PM


Ancient storms control new battlefields
There's war inside my heart
All geared up with knifes and shields
fully prepared for the start

Yesterday an outpost-report
reached my noble ear
24hours left for business to sort
'cause an enemy's strike is feared

Now here my warriors stand ready at line
brave and fair they await my speech
While i sit in front my holy shrine
I pray for a solution, me to reach

The good almighty God answers my plea's
with a brief 'Love solves all pain'
and leaves me within a mystery-sea
giving me time to clean all emotional stains

After ages of breaking my stubborn mind
I decide the obvious way to walk
so I face my warriors and tell them all kind
what I decided to do and so I talk

"Respect is a thing for everyone to earn
and everyone should get their try
Friends and enemy's...all should learn
love, not war, is a powerfull path, for all.. for you.. for I"

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-01-11 01:46 PM


very good write!
zenny
Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium
2 posted 2003-01-11 01:57 PM


thanks passing shadows

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2003-01-12 03:30 AM


love, not war, is a powerfull path, for all.. for you.. for I"
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A fantastic poem...   and I was especially left with these lines above ringing in my head.

I am glad I went digging past page 1 tonight.

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

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