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zenny
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0 posted 2003-01-11 10:50 AM


"Are you angry at me?"
were the first words you spoke
when my eyes had to see
the reason why hate once awoke

Thinking 'yes', I answered 'why'
letting go, silently, a gentle sigh
knowing the truth you better don't know
but realising, by my answer, it did show

You say you care for li'l ol' me
but I wonder while you speak...
how come you were nowhere to see
when for you I did seak

You mented my heart, also my respect
those will need time to heal
One thing's sure, it's a fact
I need to figure out how I feel...



The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

[This message has been edited by zenny (01-11-2003 10:58 AM).]

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Magnus
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1 posted 2003-01-11 11:24 AM


Good morning Zenny ...

Love carries with it many emotions.  And
sometimes the best thing is to take in how
we do feel...and also to let others know
if we hurt...


garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-01-11 11:47 AM


I feel the same as Barry does, Zenny. Sometimes people don't
have the same sensitivity and don't realize how much they've hurt
the other person. Other times they just don't care.
But, you have to figure out which one it is. Good luck........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

zenny
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3 posted 2003-01-11 12:45 PM


Thanks barry and ethel for your replies.

And ethel, deep in my heart i know he cares, it's the other thing u summed up... doesn't realise that he hurts..

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-01-11 12:56 PM


I just love how they open with that question...
angelfriend
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5 posted 2003-01-11 01:00 PM


I can feel your pain Kelly! It sounds like he may not deserve you. I like your signature. That is the greatest lesson we can learn. So many have not learned it yet. I am hoping to find someone else on my journey that has. I have been through a lot that haven't that is for sure.

Hugs,
Marjorie

"The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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