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jytree
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0 posted 2003-01-11 02:36 AM



Here I lay by myself,
I have no one else to hold,
Yet in my dreams,
I see the fields,
And I see you waiting there,
You promised me love and you promised the you would wait,
But now I stand alone,

I stand in this field of dreams,
We touched, We kissed, and now you walked away,
So now what? where is my love?

SO now all I do is walk this line,
I know that will never be enough,
But what can I do when I lost it all,
What do you want now that I am up agansit this wall,

I had a dream and it was sweet,
But now I wait on that field,
and now I hold onto them dream girl until she is finally real.



© Copyright 2003 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2003-01-11 01:56 PM




Michael,

Awwwww...May all your dreams come true. Don't know if about yourself but it seems a little sad. Hope it works out.

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
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2 posted 2003-01-11 01:59 PM


one day...just have patience. Yes, nice write!
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3 posted 2003-01-11 02:03 PM


Yes, with patience...your dream girl will
appear...usually when you least expect
that you will..

The Lonely Stranger
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4 posted 2003-01-11 02:03 PM


Know the feeling man, keep writing .... it's a good "release valve"

... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live!

jytree
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5 posted 2003-01-12 03:11 PM


well I am gald that you all liked it I am not really sad I just think it would be nice to have her but one day save I have faith and just keep moving
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