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Open Poetry #24

I Wonder

DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

0 posted 2003-01-11 02:07 AM

how much heat is required
to cast a ring of solid gold
can the heat of Her passion
drive away all that is cold
touch me in ways always new
remind me again of the bold
intice me to fall in love again
before this body gets too old

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-11 02:01 PM

I dunno.

I wonder the same thing.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-01-11 02:04 PM

Roulette, Black Jack, all games of chance.
Love can be as well. but somehow, I think
the odds in love are better..

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-01-11 02:07 PM

Don,

I hope so, though I am not a chemist to know how much heat to melt gold, I do know it takes some chemistry to answer the questions in this poem. Not sure if the character has lost interest, or what....sometimes it is scary just wondering, will it last?

Something which has to be worked on, for sure....by both people....

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2003-01-11 11:49 PM

intice me to fall in love again
before this body gets too old

smiling...that is the loveliest part of love...it's regenerative. Enjoyed.

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