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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-11 12:07 PM



Intoxicating Wash


were there any
drops on you
that weren’t desirable
I don’t think so
so I splashed on
and you waded in
up to your neck
sponging off
the drought
dwelling
in the wash
immersing
in the cool
till your scorching
thirst changed
to soaked

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-01-11 02:12 PM


oh my...I should not read you while in lack of male company...lol
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-01-11 06:44 PM



Very good, Helen...
I enjoyed the cool of this
quite a lot!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-01-11 07:01 PM


Very refreshing read Helen!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-01-11 10:03 PM


helen - an intoxicating wash it was...

BC

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