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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2003-01-10 08:44 PM

Just One More Drop…..

gold sun rise ballad
whispering in ripe vineyards
sweet wine of daylight

moon scatters my dreams
for you I weep bitter tears
as night conquers light

In black hole darkness
A drop of sun
Like golden honey
Pours along my arm.
It warms me
Momentarily,
Alive in memories
Of your gentle hand
And your soft voice
How often have I thought of you
When life became darkness
I would come to your vineyards
My hiding place,
Your open heart and soft warm rays
Of light would comfort me
With the amber of your soul.
I heard that you are dying
Death, vacant and deep darkness
I sit here in mourning
Love, the meteor of light….
Is there no protection ?
Should I walk always
Between dusty arid dawns
And dappled dusks?
I fear, I'd go quite insane
From such dazzling light ….

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-01-10 09:20 PM

Cher, I do believe your free verse is doing
quite well....goes very well with the pic
you enclosed with it...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-01-10 09:34 PM

Cheryl, very, very beautiful......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

3 posted 2003-01-11 12:01 PM

Thanks Magnus...coming from you that is quite a compliment and I appreciate it.
Ethel: thanks sweet lady...and huge hugs to you too.

aloha and be warm, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

4 posted 2003-01-11 06:52 AM

There is much
to be said
for light...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2003-01-11 10:22 AM

beautifully done...different styles evolving into a resplendit piece, it warms, it cozies, it soothes

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-01-11 10:26 AM

CSKpoet
Well done, enjoyed the read.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-01-11 11:54 AM

loved it

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-01-11 12:50 PM

wouldn't that be a good kind of crazy though?

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

9 posted 2003-01-11 04:57 PM

Thanks to all! Yes a good kind of crazy... I am.

I am glad it warm with a cozy as that was the muses intent

I have had a hard hard time writing lately so I am appreciative that this did result in some sort of quality....

Thanks again to everyone for your encouraging words

,
Cher

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-01-15 03:36 AM

Enjoyed reading this Cher...James

winston
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

11 posted 2003-01-15 09:40 AM

Aloha!
"Love - the meteor of light" is a great line.

"am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak

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