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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-01-10 04:29 PM



Remember when they called you
scooter trash?
Hardly a Harleybutt I see today
this side of the Rockies
rides with under a 6+ figure income,
not to mention an elongated frame of mind.

Good to see you are riding the winds
and quilling your thoughts
with ink instead of blood.
Those two wheels still go
where 4 Firestones fear to tread?

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-10 04:32 PM


you certainly have a series here.... link them together in a series of ongoing conversations and you have a real winner. They do not have to be anything but the personal thoughts and questions you are asking to be relevent to many..and felt by most all....

I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this...and to reading them as you do.


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2 posted 2003-01-10 04:35 PM


Now you've made me blush a little, and I thought I outgrew that physical manifestation. Thank you, I am letting go of a bundle of emotional bottlenecks.
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3 posted 2003-01-10 04:35 PM


agree with Cpat great story unfolding
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4 posted 2003-01-10 04:38 PM


Smiling at your reply, Raph. OK, so maybe I'll peel off a few layers at a time.
Kind of a poetic strip tease?

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5 posted 2003-01-10 04:39 PM


excellent I'll cue the burlesque music lol
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6 posted 2003-01-10 04:40 PM


oh...oh...do we need to go into the mature topics for the strip tease??? ( chuckling)

Go for it girl... write it out and rewrite it in someplaces how you wanted it to go....write it with heart and great gobs of gritty real...


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7 posted 2003-01-10 04:44 PM


ROTFL. Yep, I may have more than one version of this story.
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8 posted 2003-01-10 04:44 PM


"not to mention an elongated frame of mind."

OH MY...

heh heh heh...laughing like Eddie Murphy here...LOVE THIS.

let's do it lady!

I'll work the spot for ya!

yow-zah!



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9 posted 2003-01-10 05:23 PM


Haha, thanks Karen. Maybe do a serious mini-series in that other forum? grinning here
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