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Open Poetry #24

Wonderful Day

SeanD
Junior Member

since 2002-11-02

Posts 12

0 posted 2003-01-10 02:56 PM

You want so much to be her friend,
Begin to love her now and love her till the end,
Show her how an Angel should be treated,
And yet, its by your love that you're defeated,

It was so easy overcome with joy,
My heart was bought and broken like a cheap toy,
I wonder if "I Love You" lasts for all of time,
For if it does, I'll be with you till deaths rhyme,

Those three words that came in such force,
That it left me walking the wrong course,
I've lost you for now and yet,
I never had - lets not forget,

Im sorry it had to end this way,
But its my fault, I will be the one to pay,
In my heart you will stay,
Until I die, that wonderful day.

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

1 posted 2003-01-10 04:40 PM

it's a good write and I hate seeing those "0's"

regards, Lucky dale

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-01-10 05:15 PM

Poetry of love...said in so many ways by
millions over thousands of years, nicely
done..

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-01-10 05:19 PM

Those three words that came in such force,
That it left me walking the wrong course,
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how well you've expressed this side of love

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-01-10 05:41 PM

SeanD
Enjoyed the read.

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