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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-10 01:11 AM

It's raining on my charade
again
So I'll create someone
new
Though I tire of these
beginnings
For the endings always seem the
same

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-10-2003 01:45 AM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-01-10 01:50 AM

I get what you're saying, it's no easy job trying to change the end and start all over at the beginning.

Good write Raph, as always~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-01-10 02:04 AM

Raph, I understand this well. Nice write.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-01-10 03:14 AM

thanks Blues it's never easy but sometimes it has to be done

thanks dixie as always

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

4 posted 2003-01-10 06:01 AM

*smiles*...much enjoyed this play on words!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2003-01-10 06:15 AM

Smiling here, too. Enjoyed the creativity and recognition of this truth.

Liked this a great deal.

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-01-10 06:46 AM

now, i really wondering.......
who are you?

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-01-10 09:53 AM

enjoyed

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

8 posted 2003-01-10 09:59 AM

Beginnings are always a little scary ...at first. You have to give them the chance they deserve though...because one of these days....the ending will be different.

Nicely written words.

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2003-01-10 10:09 AM

now why didn't I think of this'n?

And raph? sometimes we reveal MORE of ourselves through our choice of charade.

Love the pic, angellove.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2003-01-10 10:09 AM

raining on your charade is it... hope it's drip dry..

enjoyed the thoughts here..and ending as well as beginnings are often hard..

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-01-10 10:22 AM

Thanks sandpiper, i love word play

Thank you very much Pat, always appreciate the nice things you have to say

i don't know inked that's the point

thank you vandana glad you did

Salty i hope so otherwise we're wasting our time

Karen thanks, yeah it's true I've learned about myself in knowing what I'm not than finding out what I am so far

hey Cpat haven't seen you in awhile, thanks and yeah i agree but just once it would be nice to have a happy ending

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