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Transcending Unending
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Transcending Unending |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Transcending Unending He had for her a transcending love far beyond the scope of time or space he gave to her this unending love each time he gazed upon her face Tho not met, God had this plan for this woman, to have this man through trial and tribulation they stood to be as one, in love and good She had for him a transcending love far beyond the scope of time or space she gave to him this unending love each time she gazed upon his face Tho not met, God had this plan for this woman, to have this man through trial and tribulation they stood to be as one, in love and good To know God’s wisdom, to feel his light to know His today can become a good night to experience the one love, no man to tear asunder hear it in God’s will; hear it in heaven’s thunder They had for them a transcending love far beyond the scope of time or space they gave to each this unending love and it was full of God’s sweet grace 01.10.01 |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Karilea - oh, so lovely. A gentle, warm piece of work. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes,enjoyed this much  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ, very nicely written, awesome thoughts within this poem... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes..perhaps somewhere in time... Lovely...very lovely. Much enjoyed Karilea. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the way you write it, it's almost real for me... |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
very lovely and well done! ENJOYED Cher Poetry is: |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
If only it had stayed, Karilea! This is beautiful. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
MMMMMMM kinda got it all smooth lady..dug it on ya...happy coffee babe |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, A lovely write, amen.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, this is beautiful....... I wish I had waited for my "unending love"... "Love makes the world go around" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely!  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The purest of love transcends all - Lovely, Sunny Lady..  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sunshine~ Our hearts just know when love is right, like you write of so beautifully here. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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