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Poetic Bard
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since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

0 posted 2003-01-24 02:09 PM

When ever I think of you,
I keep lookin' up,
Living in the sweet surrender of your embrace,
Thoughts so pure and divine,
All this love showing on my face,
In my smile,
In my eyes,
Within my heart and soul,
I'd be with you for eternity,
Just to say to you that I love you,
I'd give up eternity to just stand with you,
But,
When I'm not with you,
I feel low down and alone,
Breathing takes longer,
And longer leads to forgetting to breathe,
As my heart beats no longer weave,
The patern that keeps me so alive,
And then an eternity falls,
The shadows begin to fall through the sun,
As I watch them as eachone crawls,
Towards my soul,
So tonight I hold dearly to my love for you,
Tonight I shall fend off the fear of being alone,
For you,
For I love you,
And that love is the only thing,
That keeps me from the darkness so eternal,
That love that stays with me even,
When you're not with me,
Even,
When I'm not with you.

And, this is the last poem I'll post for the day, enjoy. And, tell me what ye think if ye are wishing to.

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-24 02:12 PM

"breathing takes longer"

wow!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-01-24 02:24 PM

...When I'm not with you,
I feel low down and alone,
Breathing takes longer,
And longer leads to forgetting to breathe,...

I'm glad you were not "blown away" too far,
and left this for me to read...

thank you. For this...and for that.

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

3 posted 2003-01-24 02:25 PM

She said the same thing...

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

4 posted 2003-01-24 02:31 PM

I'm glad ye liked it Sunshine. And, your welcome.

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-01-24 02:45 PM

Dang! You're SO good!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

6 posted 2003-01-24 02:48 PM

Enchantress, I'm glad ye liked it, and I'm not too great, I just write how I feel it. If ye wish to compliment someone, compliment the one that made me feel the poem for I only spill the blood that was thought. Someone had to have bled for me. But thank you, none the less.

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-01-24 04:20 PM

(big hugggssssssss) I believe everyone should always be writing about love, even when we get political we are writing about love as we are using love to try to make love of the loveless and love is what keeps the world attune! (sigh) I wish for this love in you to never marcescere, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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