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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

0 posted 2003-01-09 01:01 PM

Faithlessness (01/09/03)

Oh but to be able to recognize you from afar
To loudly proclaim just who you are
Raising my mighty sword in offense
Never believing in your pretense

You are the evil that has flayed me so many times before
I have yet to make a score

You have caught me countless times by surprise
Thinking you would be my demise
But to your dismay
Not dead but wounded did I lay

So now I have felt your lance upon my heart
In the process learned to discern your part
Hated betrayal of love and trust
I will be making the final thrust

And recognize you from henceforth, I will
No longer blinded, your fate will be stamped with my seal

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-01-09 01:25 PM

Love this. smiling here.....
This can include many more than just lovers....

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Barbara Trautman
Member

since 2002-10-23

Posts 90

2 posted 2003-01-09 02:19 PM

This poem may be referring to a lover but it could also be referring to many kinds of experiences. It touches my heart. Write some more like this, please. Barbara

shannon harter
Junior Member

since 2003-02-03

Posts 31
waesaw,IN USA

3 posted 2003-02-12 11:41 PM

sister dearest, did we forget to read one to me?

i feel so left out.lol this is a good one. good thing i done smart search and fond it, otherwise i would never have heard it. i have been looking for the war one. lol the war one. i cant remember its name. i also cant seem to find it. a little help here??

love you,
annie

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-02-13 08:31 AM

Now sweetest, if I read everything to you, you wouldn't have any surprises from me when you come here!! The "war one" is "Freedom's Bell".

love you,
Euwy

Brad Majors