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A Tone of Voice
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0 posted 2003-01-08 07:12 PM


you are the aqueous sway
that tempts the layers of her flesh
arranged by your mouth
she is lost in the sighs, linger apparition
that lies sleeping in
the red earth
she needs the sweet scent
of fingerprints and the sensation
that provides
comfort when the atmosphere is
purifying and merciless
scrape the walls of her womb with your image
but do not use or abuse
for she is vulnerable smoky lips
moist and rich
in the texture of
illicit dreams



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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-01-08 10:40 PM


Your poetry creates the nicest atmosphere!
Beautiful images and feelings ATOV~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2003-01-08 10:47 PM


Very sensual write...passionate in the softest of points. ThisDiamond
A Tone of Voice
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3 posted 2003-01-08 11:13 PM


BluesSerenade, you always make me feel good, thank you ~Lady~ I do appreciate your kind words!


ThisDiamond, Hey I like that name......Diamonds are a girl's best friend after all *S*~! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to respond.you are a Gem~!


Atov~~~  


garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-01-09 12:57 PM


Hey Lady,
I was gone from my computer for a while and didn't see you here.
I like this poem and the way you wrote it. It's beautiful......  

so more folks can see it.....  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

ecrivan
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my own state
5 posted 2003-01-09 01:02 AM


quite suggestive...welcome to piptalk
A Tone of Voice
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6 posted 2003-01-09 07:19 AM


garysgirl

Thank you for stopping bye, it's good to see your name again,  you gg are like sunshine bright and cheery.....and I do appreciate your words!!


ecrivan, I like to write softly suggestive, leaving a lot to the imagination, the blanks are to be filled in by the reader.....Thank you for the welcome. *S*

~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~

~A Tone of Voice~

Salty
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since 2002-11-23
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7 posted 2003-01-09 09:00 AM


Very soft and sultry....and all in good taste.   Very WEll Written ~~!!!!!!


~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2003-01-09 10:44 AM


a good place to be, "lost in the sighs"


VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
9 posted 2003-01-09 10:58 AM


first I've read of yours, me be thinkin', me be thinkin' it won't be the last, either!!!

Fantastic use of language in your word-weaving.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

A Tone of Voice
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10 posted 2003-01-09 01:36 PM


Salty

Very soft and sultry....and all in good taste?  Smiling here, well thank you Ms. Salty, what a nice thing to say~!




Midnitesun
a good place to be, "lost in the sighs"

Smiling...I agree, *wink* Thank you Midnitesun
VAS,

Such splendid words of encouragement, thank you very much *S*


~Atov~

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15
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land of flora and fauna
11 posted 2003-01-10 05:57 AM


"moist and rich
in the texture of
illicit dreams"

yes, yes, YES!!! Enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

A Tone of Voice
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12 posted 2003-01-11 09:06 AM


Sandpiper, Thank you for dropping in and leaving such nice words for me to digest. Yes, Yes, Yes, you are greatly appreciated *smiling here ~!
ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038
USA
13 posted 2003-01-11 09:20 AM


When the red red earth is not appreciated for her immense beauty, the despoilment has begun; ah, but when lovingly taken care of, she can be
the utmost sinful delight!

ATOV, your words echo in my mind
and reverberate within my soul.
Great to see you!
Jeff

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
14 posted 2003-01-11 09:24 AM


WOW!!  I love this!
Very very nicely done!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
15 posted 2003-01-11 09:35 AM


A Tone of Voice
You dance the symbols well, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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displaced
16 posted 2003-01-11 01:08 PM


a bit of a painful feeling I got here...so you know I can relate and I like it!
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